At first this started pretty slow which made it hard for me to get into this. But once the action started I was captivated. I wanted to know why this was happening. Who Mr Gold was.
I did wonder through out why Ben was remembering things from his past regarding Will but by the end I understood.
I'm a little confused at the ending as it's left open with so many questions, so I'm hoping we get more from this. Otherwise the ending being such a cliffhanger would be a little disappointing.