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Scorpions by Rachel Howzell Hall
3.0
adventurous dark mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Plot 💭: 
  * Engaging 

Writing  🖌️:
  * Clear & Concise

Pace & Pacing  ⏱️:
  * Perfect Pace 

Structure 🏗️:
  * Well organized
  * Too short

Setting 🌏:
  * Contemporary
  * Domestic abode to hot desert
  * Fits the story 

Characters 🎭:
  * Unlikable & Unreliable 

Theme & Message 💬:
  * "No honor among thieves"

Book Cover 🎨:
  * Beautiful imagery 
    
Target Audience 🎯:
  * Adults

Thoughts 🗣:
  * The main character was a bit sympathetic 
  * The unlikable/unreliable critique stands for everyone else but you aren't supposed to like them
  * This is an Amazon Original so it should be short. However, I wonder if the story could have been longer in order to add more suspense between the protagonist + antagonists. Or, could go beyond the ending to see the protagonist dealing with the aftermath and the authorities.
  * Scorpions don't really represent backstabbers like snakes do so doesn't really fit theme wise to me (they did see one in the desert though)

Rating: B-