Sometimes the paragraphs didn’t easily flow one after another. I find that when that happens it dampens my liking of the book. It slowly started to pick up but by Chapter 14/46, I decided it might be time to think about dnfing. Maybe I could have switched to the audio to really see but I don’t think that would’ve helped much. I found some of the sentences were giving that “look, I can write energy” which honestly was another reason to dnf for me.