This would be better as a longer story but as it is, it really isn’t that bad. It’s perhaps a little heavy handed at times, and everything is kind of rushed. But there’s some really nice things in here. There’s a few things that, while the book comes on a little strong about, it’s not wrong. I really liked how Naomi responded to Donovan’s “you make me want to be a better man” bit. And there’s actually character arcs in here, which I really wasn’t expecting.