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diamondxgirl 's review for:
This Mortal Coil
by Emily Suvada
This was messy and cookie cutter, with a decent beginning and decent (but predictable) ending.
In this story, you’ll find:
1. A love triangle with the boy from her past and the mysterious new protector
2. A dystopian world where a virus screwed up humanity and people are living in a bunker
3. A savior girl with a past and some messed up parentage
4. A false ending so there will be more books
The new and exciting part is the gene therapy and tech additions, though they were messy and hard to follow. As a person interested in genetics, I wanted to love this but it just wasn’t there. Had this been 2010, I’d probably be all over this story. But it’s played out and unoriginal.
In this story, you’ll find:
1. A love triangle with the boy from her past and the mysterious new protector
2. A dystopian world where a virus screwed up humanity and people are living in a bunker
3. A savior girl with a past and some messed up parentage
4. A false ending so there will be more books
The new and exciting part is the gene therapy and tech additions, though they were messy and hard to follow. As a person interested in genetics, I wanted to love this but it just wasn’t there. Had this been 2010, I’d probably be all over this story. But it’s played out and unoriginal.