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sleepydahlias 's review for:
Daughter of Water
by A.S. Dampt
Thank you to NetGalley for this ARC. All thoughts are my own.
This was an interesting read. I think the world building was very well done. The magic system wasn’t hard to understand and yet it was still unique and well integrated. I feel like there were points that there was a lot of info dumping which made the story drag.
There was a lot more telling, especially in regards to the political situation, than showing.
I also feel like the only character that was developed and given an arc was Heidi/Sylvie. The rest of the First Borne felt very one dimensional. I feel like Gaëtan all but disappeared by halfway through. I also feel like there weren’t very high stakes or excitement throughout, and the climax felt strangely paced speeding up the end of the story in comparison to the rest.
I will probably be reading the sequel, but I wanted to see more of Sylvie and Loïc’s relationship beyond a few moments here and there. I did like Sylvie and Margot‘s growing friendship. I am excited to see how the quests work out. I like how the plot was formatted and it was a fun read. I do also think and hope that we see more age-appropriate content. All four of the firstborns were 20 but they were referred to his children so often they could’ve been 16 and nothing in the story would’ve changed.
This was an interesting read. I think the world building was very well done. The magic system wasn’t hard to understand and yet it was still unique and well integrated. I feel like there were points that there was a lot of info dumping which made the story drag.
There was a lot more telling, especially in regards to the political situation, than showing.
I also feel like the only character that was developed and given an arc was Heidi/Sylvie. The rest of the First Borne felt very one dimensional. I feel like Gaëtan all but disappeared by halfway through. I also feel like there weren’t very high stakes or excitement throughout, and the climax felt strangely paced speeding up the end of the story in comparison to the rest.
I will probably be reading the sequel, but I wanted to see more of Sylvie and Loïc’s relationship beyond a few moments here and there. I did like Sylvie and Margot‘s growing friendship. I am excited to see how the quests work out. I like how the plot was formatted and it was a fun read. I do also think and hope that we see more age-appropriate content. All four of the firstborns were 20 but they were referred to his children so often they could’ve been 16 and nothing in the story would’ve changed.