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My Dark Psycho by LoveBite Shorts
1.75
dark fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: N/A
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

FM Dark novella 

- way to many typos
- couldn't believe the captivity-to-love for a second
- characters completely unfocused, some traumas here and there for the heck of it
- homophobia MMC
- Some groping while FMC was drugged asleep (noncon to another level)
- virgin fmc (!?!)
- and finally breeding kink 

There was some potential at first, what with the secluded FMC living for the glimpse of lives she watched through her binoculars. Then it went all sideways