The writing style felt a little stilted at first, but it was engaging and natural by the end. I also struggled some with just understanding how the tech works and visualizing the colony and God's City. However, the characters are really well developed and I found myself relating to the main character in ways I kind of wish I didn't. The book did have some emotional l impact on me and I think I'll remember it, but it's not quite a new favorite. I'll definitely continue in the series, though and see if it gets any better.