2.5 stars

I like the plot, a lot! The dialog was horrendous though. Seriously the only thing that would have made them saying y'all every other paragraph acceptable was if I were playing a twisted drinking game where y'all is the trigger word for taking a shot. Then maybe by page 10 I wouldn't have even minded because all the words would have been blurred together. Also, I love sarcasm, clearly, but every thing that comes out of Jen's, Sally's and, Jacque's mouth was pretty over the top. They were all beyond immature and trying way too hard to be comical. to me they just came off as annoying. There was so much potential for this book to be great, I wish I could have overlooked my annoyance with the girls but I just couldn't. Fane was pretty awesome though and I liked his family too. At the end of the day I'm just glad that this book was free and I didn't invest anything more than my time into it.