This has potential

Three things:
1. I expected the editing to be way better, but there was so many points where characters were talking but the "" around the speech was half there or not at all. And points where something was written opposite of what the intention was. Whoever edited this ... I hope the authors didn't pay a lot for the service.
2. The story itself has a lot of potential, but I felt like Toby flip flopped a lot and every time I thought her character was maturing or moving forward, inexplicably she would go back to behaviour I thought she had moved past.
3. I feel dumb for this, but it took me till 90% of the book to realize just who the four main male characters were named after.