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Star fruit by Kamryn Kingsberry
3.5
adventurous hopeful lighthearted reflective slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

Huge thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC!

This book had all the ingredients for something special—queer joy, a theater backdrop, a swoony romance, and conversations that matter. It promised so much heart… but unfortunately, it left me wanting more.

So many scenes started strong, building tension or emotion—and then just stopped. Time and time again, just when something big was about to hit, the moment would fade out or skip ahead. It felt like we were brushing past the story’s most meaningful beats instead of sinking into them.

The romance between Ari and Taylor, while full of potential, didn’t quite land. We're told they’re each other’s “dream girls,” completely head-over-heels—but it was hard to feel that spark on the page. There weren’t enough of those grounding, intimate moments that show why they connected. I wanted to root for them, but I didn’t fully understand what brought them together beyond surface-level attraction.

The theater aspect, which could’ve added so much texture, felt more like a background setting than a living, breathing part of the story. The actual process of putting on a production—the teamwork, the messiness, the passion—was mostly missing. It was mentioned, but not really felt.

There were powerful themes at play—transphobia, homophobia, and the complexity of allyship—and I appreciated the effort to include them. But these moments often stayed on the surface. The story leaned heavily into Ya’s journey of becoming a better ally, which sometimes seemed to overshadow the voices and experiences of the queer characters themselves.

At just 249 pages, the book felt a little rushed. It had big things to say, but not enough room to fully say them. Still, the foundation is there. The heart is there. With more space to breathe and more time spent developing its core relationships and themes, this could’ve been something really memorable.

There’s promise in this author’s voice, and I’m definitely curious to see what they do next.