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PHANTOM X1 by TGREAPER
4.0

NOTE: This is a flash fiction story of 8 pages.

This story is set on a planet named Sirius Alpha where there's not supposed to be life...but there is. The Captain of the USS Phantom is supposed to scan the planet for alien life, but then a distress signal comes in from two men on a plant on the surface. They say sea creatures that look like dinosaurs are killing everyone and destroying everything. The Phantom comes to the rescue. Of course, things don't go exactly as planned. The story ends with a very climatic ending and the promise of more.

CON: Expensive for such a short story.

Phantom X1 has a Star Trek vibe to it.

PS: I won a contest to have my name used in this story, but I do not personally know the author.