I also listened to this one and I'm not sure if that had a part in this, but I didn't love this one either. I am starting to think that maybe the shorter stories are not Hazelwood's forte. It feels like I can't connect to her characters and the short story doesn't give me enough time to connect or really feel their relationship. Insta-love is a trope that I really don't like. I get being attracted and all that, but this was a little much. I think the fact that it was a short timeframe doesn't help it. It was just too much and made it hard for me to believe. I gave this a bit higher of a rating because I did enjoy it the most out of them. I am a little nervous going into her release coming out soon.