First off, I’m not sure that my galley is complete. It seems to end in a weird spot. Almost like there is no end. If that is intentional it sucks. If it’s not, then okay, this could be better. The entire premise of this book is odd. It’s a story about a pirate father and son reading the Nativity Story. They make cute barbs about the story, and it turns out that when they didn’t make the christmas party, all their friends brought the party to them. And that would have been a great end. But father and son lay down to sleep and then the snow began, and then … nothing. Just another illustration. Don't get me wrong. I love the illustrations in this book, bug that's about it. It is either an incomplete galley, or an incomplete book.