if this was on ao3 it would be labelled porn-with-plot. Too long tbh, especially since a lot of what happened ended up being just like... kind of pointless? Like why was Ryan there?

And why did we just throw in a TRAUMATIZING near death experience for Stassie that seemed to disappear a few chapters later?

It was giving very... I wrote and edited this one chapter at a time. That's not a bad thing if that's how I'm consuming the story! And it was good for keeping my attention! But like lets edit a bit more? Anyway I don't think I'll pick up the next one but I WILL be reading if/when my king of autistic rizz Henry gets a book

(Very very minor theatre kid nitpick: How is this college doing Hamilton?? The rights aren't out, and they'd be astronomical if they were. WHY is this college doing hamilton. Why are white-ass Lola and Liv playing the Schuyler sisters??)