Fairly low conflict rom com. 

Minus points for so so so many punctuation errors and a few spelling errors. I’m going to be generous and assume the end quotations being flipped after dialogue that ended on a dash was an autocorrect error. It still should have been caught and fixed during editing. 

Minus points for the FMC making a joke about another character “having more boyfriends than Taylor Swift” and also saying wanting to cook and take care of people “made her a bad feminist.” It’s 2024, y’all. Do we not understand that Feminism isn’t out to demonize trad wives and “traditional” values? Do we not understand that humans need food to live and that cooking is not a gendered activity? *sigh* Do better.