Overall, this could be considered a pretty sweet story. It has a touch of a bite in it

omg, my heart is probably never going to recover from that scene of the ML watching the MC sabotage and then un-sabotage his car over and over again before going and HELPING him, it's been months and my heart still clenches when I think about it

but after the first arc it falls pretty heavily to pattern and starts feeling more like your generic QT story. The last two arcs (the cultivation world and then real world) were really sweet and I'm glad they got their happy ending.

I emphatically did not like the extra chapter about the systems. There was something really jarring about the whole "hey this is a love triangle AAAAAND END" and part of it is just a violent hatred for love triangles and the rest is that it was essentially pointless. The author didn't do anything with it beyond establish it existed and then bam. Story's over. Not that I wanted to deal with excruciating chapters of two men fighting over what was clearly going to be an oblivious MC (also annoying) but it was grating to just cut it off there.