-> Very little information given about the world (what is the rot? What is the rite?? Why is it important? Who are the Blind??) 1/3 of the way in and I still don’t know!!). I mean no-one likes info-dumping but still…
-> Very “she’s not like other girls” MC
-> All powerful male MC who is…18 years old??
-> Sooooo 2-D villain