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Undercover Bromance by Lyssa Kay Adams
4.25
adventurous emotional funny mysterious tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

You ever read a book that you loved a lot but also hated just a little bit?

I absolutely loved the main storyline in Undercover Bromance. And the characters (except Royce 😤)! And the FEELINGS! The main characters take down a sexual harassing f*ckhead and it is SO SATISFYING. And exciting! And emotional!

✨BUT✨

I need to air some grievances re: Lyssa’s word choices, as follows:

You think “folds” is bad? How about “pink parts”? No. Just…no.
Referring to a character’s erection as his “you-know-what” after a VERY open door seggs scene? No.
Using “vagina” when you mean “vulva” or any other slang word for that? Please ma’am. I beg you. Do not. 
Using lines from the national anthem during a seggs scene? ABSOLUTELY MOTHERCLUCKING NOT.

Besides these egregious word choices, I looooooved this book. I liked it *more* than Bromance Book Club. Liv? Top notch. Mack? AH-mazing. Main story? Incredible.

 đŸ‘đŸťRecommended. I don’t know how Ms Adams does it, but she writes books so good that I don’t mind the “pink parts.” (Okay okay I MIND, just you know, not enough to make memes about it. Yet.)