(NB: I've read probably the two most-debated reviews addressing questionable aspects of this book: Asma's and A Naga of the Nusantara's. Both are worthwhile reads that bring up valid points. I also acknowledge that as a Taiwanese-American reader I have blind spots and biases; my intention is not to speak over or invalidate anyone's thoughts or feelings. I only speak to my own experiences and opinions.)

While I appreciate the detailed and clearly-carefully-considered worldbuilding in concept, it's mainly conveyed through long-ish explanations somewhat slow down the pacing without (in my opinion) meaningfully contributing to atmospheric-ness. I'm fascinated by the magic system built in part on language proficiency and the sociopolitical system built on enclave membership and alliances. There are also lots of moving parts to keep track of so at times I was a bit confused and/or overwhelmed by everything going on, but on the whole it was an engaging adventure with intriguing characters.

That said, El is the only character who felt nuanced, though to be fair she's the narrator and was particularly vivid, with real character growth that felt more organic than contrived. I'm especially hoping to see more about El and her prophecy, especially since this first book literally begins and ends (and, arguably, revolves around)

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Orion

. Though that character grew on me as they grew on El, I would love to see more about the others. Meanwhile, I found most of the interpersonal relationships reasonably evocative — I really look forward to seeing how the characters and relationships continue to develop in the next book!

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