My full review is here on my personal website. I'll post my conclusion here, though:

This is the second book in a series. I’m disappointed in Lauren Kate because I feel that she didn’t improve as a writer the way most writers do while writing a series.

I gave “Torment” a 1.5 out of 5.0 because of the writing and the continued lack of character development.

The very worst thing about this book is the fact that the writing is worse than in “Fallen.”

The very best thing about this book is the cover. It’s such a shame, too.