Not working for me at all. There's too much "you can't touch my sister/daughter" stuff going on, and it is very insta-lust. The heroine was 12 last she saw the hero, and he is instantly kissing her face the moment he re-meets her (doesn't recognize her even though she's working in her family's bakery and he was best friend with her brother). The couple isn't talking as much as I'd like, and she's desperate to have him have sex with her without explaining to her family she's an adult and can do what she wants.