The base concept for this novel was good, it had potential, but I found the execution to be extremely lacking. Readers never get the chance to care about Reeve and Mari's relationship before she is out of the picture so I wasn't particularly invested in the story. And the severe grammatical errors kept me from enjoying the read. I don't care about forgetting a comma here and there but every other page had a missing period at the end of a sentence. I also didn't find any of the characters interesting. They lacked depth and all spoke the same. There was no difference in the way the characters acted, it all felt very rigid and dull.