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meganlowe87 's review for:
Trick
by H.J. Bellus
Let me start off by saying I love this series. I love all the guys and girls and the family they've created.
I didn't love this book. I felt it was rushed and skimped on the character development. I didn't see any development of feelings between Mack and Trick, it just happened. We see none of the good stuff of their developing feelings, you know, the great part of early relationships.
I also don't understand why Mack was so anti-social. I get her history, but to me, it didn't add up to what it was playing out as. Why was she afraid to order in restaurants? Why was she so Shy?
Also, I felt like Trick could've been more complex. He clearly had money, hello Rolex and yellow diamond earrings, so why not tell us why he preferred to live in a small apartment?
In addition to this, in the last few chapters there was a ton of info dumped, not least the buried lead with Trick's fight.
I feel like there could've been so much more for this book but it was restricted for whatever reason.
I wanted to love it, but couldn't.
I didn't love this book. I felt it was rushed and skimped on the character development. I didn't see any development of feelings between Mack and Trick, it just happened. We see none of the good stuff of their developing feelings, you know, the great part of early relationships.
I also don't understand why Mack was so anti-social. I get her history, but to me, it didn't add up to what it was playing out as. Why was she afraid to order in restaurants? Why was she so Shy?
Also, I felt like Trick could've been more complex. He clearly had money, hello Rolex and yellow diamond earrings, so why not tell us why he preferred to live in a small apartment?
In addition to this, in the last few chapters there was a ton of info dumped, not least the buried lead with Trick's fight.
I feel like there could've been so much more for this book but it was restricted for whatever reason.
I wanted to love it, but couldn't.