I would've liked some more diversity — at least LGBTQ if not ethnic/racial, considering the latter would admittedly be a little hard, even confusing, to implement in a story where most of the characters are actually invisible — but it was a thought-provoking and to some extent empowering read, if slightly harder to relate to as a young person firmly entrenched in the media/tech generation. I also felt like the ending was in a good place, in terms of the narrative.