You Could Do Damage by K.C. Mills really heats up in the last 15% of the book, but for the most part the book is anticlimactic. I'm surprised by the moderate character development, with so much dialogue, I expected to know a lot more about all of the characters, but especially the FMC, Nari. Since there's very little information about her, I found it hard to connect with her as a character. The MMC, Kincaid, does a better job at expressing Nari's thoughts, feelings, and actions than she does. It's great to see a MMC who understands his partner in a romance novel, but it's weird because Nari and Kincaid's relationship is very new. Though I am not a huge fan of this book or the way it ended, I'll read book 2 with the hopes that it wraps things up and gives me more connection to Nari and has a lot more...action. 

I recommend You Could Do Damage to anyone who loves K.C. Mills books, those who prefer the arranged marriage trope, and fans of dark romances.