I really enjoyed the story in this Omegaverse romance as far as the characters, situations, etc. but I haven't wanted to heavily edit a book for sentence fragments, comma splices, word tenses, etc. in a long time. It didn't ruin the reading for me but it was noticable and I don't remember that in the last series by the author that I read a month ago. Shiloh is an Omega and has just left the pack she's lived with for two years after they've finally said they won't bond with her and make things official because their band is famous and it's not a good look. She's on a budget flight across the country to get home to her Gram when she goes into heat and one of the pilots, Cole, ends up helping her until they land. His pack, made up of his younger brother Mack and their best friend Jonah, both fellow alphas, meet them and go to the Heat Haven center to help her through the heat. There's a slip in the shower that leaves her with a broken ankle so when things are done she goes to stay with them as she heals and they all fall in love, then have to deal with her awful exes later. I liked the characters and discovered that Jonah's family as well as some other side characters who will obviously get books in this new series, all their parents have books in an earlier series so I'm going to read some of those.