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The Girl Who Came Home by Hazel Gaynor
1.0

The story is bland, the only interesting character gets about four pages all and all, and the writing resembles a 15-year-old's first attempt at Twilight fanfiction.

I swore to myself that I would finish this book, and I guess the relief I felt when finally ending the torture was worth the read. Definitely the best part of it, that's for sure.

How can a story that good be spoiled so much by poor writing? The author might want to learn about commas, too.

Ah well. I'm glad that's over. Now, let's move on to another book.