I really loved the concept of this, and I love that it brings awareness to community outreach and harm reduction, but writing wise I was really thrown off by the the sudden change of dialogue style halfway through. 
Like I don't believe a young punk girl would say "I can't bear to witness this, I can't!" or "I am eager to learn the lessons of the future!" after lines such as "get off my ass, dude" and "you realize this holiday exists so that you can buy more shit, right?"