For being 21 and 30, the main characters acted like they were 12 and 13. The sex scenes were so bad they felt like they were fanfiction written by someone who has never had sex. Maybelle was emotionally abused by Edmund simply because she wanted time to think about being married and he couldn't handle the fact that she wasn't killing herself to be with him. There were tons of typos and grammatical errors that drove me up the wall. Giving it two stars because Maybelle's grandmother was pretty cool and I enjoyed her school and its students (minus Edmund).