This was way more gruesome then I expected and honestly I had such a hard time actually reading this. It failed to keep my attention for any given amount of time.

The only thing that kept me captive was the continuous question of where they are finding all of this Spandex in a post apocalyptic world and why of all fabrics someone would want to wear that. Especially when it covers so little, you'd think they'd be cold.

Also it's implied that this other tribe just continually goes and steals women from other tribes quite regularly due to the lack of women in their tribe. But the implied fact that these women don't survive long, makes no sense. If you have a lack of women already, it wouldn't make sense to treat them poorly,

Also in general the Male to Female Ration seems already tipped in their being a lack of women. It makes no sense that they'd just slaughter women without a second thought. Adding to the lack of Women, it's surprising that women in general don't seem to be more respected in their communities. Given that women are the minority, and ridiculously buff guys are a dime a dozen.