Too. many. arguments.

I was sooo tired of Cel and Kyle fighting. I felt like a kid watching their parents go at it. Like, can y'all stop? I understand these fights progressed the story in a way, but it just dragged on and on.

There's a nice backdrop on mental health issues and some freaky, creepy stuff going on. The mystery aspect was the most compelling part of this story, but I felt like so much buildup made the climax a bit weak.

Abi had a lot of focus in this story, but I would've liked more insight on Cel. I only saw her being grouchy. She always lashed out and assumed people thought she was "crazy." From a story-writing pov, if there was a flashback or an experience that made her feel this way, I would feel more sympathetic toward her. We see a glimpse of the mental breakdown she had that made her lose her last job. If there were some whispers of, "she just went crazy!" maybe Cel's kneejerk reaction would feel more impactful. Idk.

Still, I like how this story highlights how mental health issues were handled so trash back then. At least, now things are slowly progressing.