I often don't mind miscommunication trope in romance manga as it can be really cute to see clueless love in a visual genre. I was okay with a slower burn to get there, both guys being oblivious to their feelings until wayyyy too late. It's kinda adorable. But what really frustrated me was that when we finally do get a kiss in the very end we are blocked from seeing it! By a light pole! All the misdirections along the way to finally get the biggest misdirection in the end was a really big let down. I'd be curious to see why the artist/author did it this way. 

Additionally, we time jump right after the big confession between the couple. Again, all this build up just to lose the momentum and miss out on what should be one of the sweetest moments. I'm not sure if some of this is because of the book originally being released in shorter snippets online, but I feel like even that wouldn't explain some of this issue.

Overall cute, maybe book two shows them more as a couple together?