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3.0

The story was interesting enough to keep me reading to the end. However, the plot was too convoluted, and the format only hindered the story. If she had used a different writing format, maybe it would have worked better. Like a standard narration with multiple povs and then insert some mixed media documents to supplement the story. Instead we got over explained plot points and “twists,” not to mention the ending. I mean, we got a whole email where one character details everything she figured out to another character—that already knows everything!—just to be like “aha! i figured it out” and never sends it (clearly, the sole purpose was to tell the reader what happened). To me that’s kinda cheap.