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To Shape a Dragon's Breath
by Moniquill Blackgoose
Ahoy there me mateys! This is a dragon book and the start of a new series that ended up being an uneven read even though I do want to read the next one when it comes out.
Pros:
- Dragons: Cause who doesn't love them?
- Indigenous main character: I really enjoyed Anequs and did sympathize with her plight regarding her world being colonized by the Anglish.
- Diversity: I enjoyed the ideas of a bi-sexual main character who comes from a culture that is okay with polyamory. I enjoyed the neurodivergent friend. I loved Anequs befriending a servant against the norm.
- Alternate History: I like worldbuilding where our world is twisted.
Cons:
- Dragons: How can they be a con? Not much happens on the page with them. If they were turned into fancy horses or dogs, a lot of the story would stay the same.
- Indigenous main character: Anegus world seemed like an utopia with only a little bit of money. It seemed like an overly idealized version of such a culture.
- Diversity: Some of the friendships seemed contrived, and I am not always a fan of the friend group being made up of all misfits. Makes it feel like the characters are checkboxes.
- Alternate History: I felt that this alternate history was too much English and Nordic culture. We did not get enough of Anequs' world. I also feel like the message about colonization took away from the plot. Too much moralizing and not action.
- Too Long: This book was over 5oo pages. A lot of the political philosophizing could have been removed as well as the chemical educational lectures. This novel needed about 200 pages trimmed. And more dragons!
Arrrr!
Pros:
- Dragons: Cause who doesn't love them?
- Indigenous main character: I really enjoyed Anequs and did sympathize with her plight regarding her world being colonized by the Anglish.
- Diversity: I enjoyed the ideas of a bi-sexual main character who comes from a culture that is okay with polyamory. I enjoyed the neurodivergent friend. I loved Anequs befriending a servant against the norm.
- Alternate History: I like worldbuilding where our world is twisted.
Cons:
- Dragons: How can they be a con? Not much happens on the page with them. If they were turned into fancy horses or dogs, a lot of the story would stay the same.
- Indigenous main character: Anegus world seemed like an utopia with only a little bit of money. It seemed like an overly idealized version of such a culture.
- Diversity: Some of the friendships seemed contrived, and I am not always a fan of the friend group being made up of all misfits. Makes it feel like the characters are checkboxes.
- Alternate History: I felt that this alternate history was too much English and Nordic culture. We did not get enough of Anequs' world. I also feel like the message about colonization took away from the plot. Too much moralizing and not action.
- Too Long: This book was over 5oo pages. A lot of the political philosophizing could have been removed as well as the chemical educational lectures. This novel needed about 200 pages trimmed. And more dragons!
Arrrr!