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3.0

I read a Duke publishing version of this that was riddled with punctuation errors, making the dense subject basically inscrutable. Fueled by caffeine, I could power through paragraphs only to lose the thread and lost track of what the author was dancing around. It felt like this was transcribed from a speech, more conversational than literate in content. I'd like to read another version of this and supplement it with notes for greater understanding.