ARC received for an honest review

I am in a quandry about how to write this review. There were so many things that I liked about Cake A Diem, however there were things that drew me out of the story, or that I had to read a couple of times to make sense of them.

I liked Zoe and Jake - though Zoe at times did get on my nerves - but this is probably a me problem.

I loved their insta-spark and their banter together, and you can't help but smile at times.

Now, I am not sure if this is because this was an ARC copy, and it had not gone through a final round of edits, however I found a lot of cliche sayings that were wrong, there were sentence structures that were all over the place and made it clunky to read.

There were also lots of times where punctuation was in the wrong place, making the flow of the sentence stilted.

Again, since this was an ARC and I have been advised that this was going through another round of edits, these issues may have already been fixed prior to the final copy being released.

This book has promise, and I am sure others won't have the issues I had with it

Again, as an ARC, I did not let these affect my rating of this book.