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Sharing Rylee by D. Kelly
3.0

Received for an honest review.

I wanted to love this book. I started off loving it. I made it through the painful wait for Rylee to share her secret with Nick and Pete and then part one finished.
Oh great, I thought, the good stuff is going to start to happen but starting part two, with a change in voice from first to third person was incredibly jarring. I absolutely hated the use of it here. It makes describing action so difficult and leads to an increased use of names so every second word is a character's name. It became repetitive.
I also thought there were too many coincidences. It would've been much better if Nick and Pete were already in a relationship before Rylee, it just played out a little too nicely.
I also felt like the book started in the middle. I know it's the second book in a series but I felt, for those who haven't read book one like myself, if we went back to when Rylee first met Pete it would give a more complete story.
I thought Sharing Rylee was going to be a beautiful story of acceptance and discovery, it was nowhere near that which is a shame, it could've been so much more than just another book, sorry!