I didn’t like the start but I thought it would get better, and it did briefly. Some how they managed to fit almost everyone one of my most disliked tropes. 

She’s got some not like other girls vibes, there is miscommunication, a certain trope at 75% and of course an accidental you know what. I liked some parts like Clay but over all it read like someone rewrote their old 2014 fanfic without getting rid of the bad parts. (this is not hate on fanfic just that particular not like other girls stuff) There is also daddy kink on like two pages which isn’t much but I still don’t like it.