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2.0
adventurous lighthearted slow-paced

I did not want to review this book negatively, because R. A. Bea is clearly a talented writer. The language and storytelling was beautiful. For a young adult book, the characters were a perfect found family, with lots of banter and wit. They reminded me of the classic trope; fun young group of vigilantes.
 
However, this book made no sense. I could not fathom what was happening in each chapter very well, and had to reread many sections to understand the plot. I realise this is the first book in a series, but there was no natural ending or cliff-hanger. It was as though R. A. Bea had so many magical fascinating ideas that they overflowed from the page and created nonsense. For example, the multiple P.O.V would suddenly introduce the perspective of a background character I did not recognise but was expected to understand. It was therefore a very slow read and not particularly enjoyable, although I usually like a Y.A fantasy. I will not be buying the second book! 

"She knew what the short answer was, but "war" didn't sum up the feeling of unease. The closest comparison she had was "magic."

"It's a strange thing, Happiness" [he] said "There are times when we feel like we don't deserve it. What a beautiful thing to be able to revisit that lull in between that caters to contentment and safety." 

"The mind could not translate what it no longer remembered. He wondered if the heart could still feel the loss."