It was an OK read. I was a little disappointed in a way that it wasn’t as gripping as other fake relationship stories I’ve read recently.

Either I’m getting tired of the he-can’t-possibly-like-me-in-that-way cliché (didn’t like it in the previous story either) or it made even less sense in this story. So Olive thinks Adam likes someone else, an “amazing girl”, who is in the same department. Well, it should be easy enough to figure out who she is. There aren’t that many women in the Biology department and even less between the age brackets of 25 and 35. She could have done what she does best and do some research to find the most likely candidate for Adam’s affections.

Holden’s a hoot, though.