For a less than 300 page book this book had its ups and downs. Overall it was a good story but I feel like it was trying to do too much in too little. I also felt like there was a lot of telling rather than letting the characters and story play itself out. I don't know if either of those makes sense but something was off. Not too much depth in characters or story. It was a good intro to light bdsm/kinks storyline though.