Mostly justified its considerable length. Can overlook the fact that the characters are politicians because a) politicians and CEOs are just a romance stable, and b) it apparently started as a Game of Thrones fic. Not sure why the brother needed to be a cop, but maybe he was based on the knight Ser Loras? Needed a bit more editing, catching the times that words were repeated too closely together. But I loved the characters and the character development, and the length of the book really allowed us to delve into the characters and situations.