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Shoplifter by Michael Cho
2.0

Okay, the artwork is beautiful, and I enjoy the use of pink.

I just don't know what I or the audience was supposed to take away from this story. Every story doesn't have to be wrapped up with a pretty bow. But it needs to have some sort of end/conclusion.

To me, the story was awfully boring. At first, I thought the premise would be entirely of shoplifting. Like stealing's the only thrill Corrina gets outside of her dead-end job. Instead, it wasn't really a plot point. Oh, you see a guy you like? Great. Oh, too bad your best friend had a one night stand with him. Shoplifting? What? Is that what this is supposed to be about? Bruh...

Overall, I think this story would work much better as a webcomic.