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Evocation by S.T. Gibson
2.5

This had all the makings of a great story, but just didn't quite get there. The amount of cheesy dialogue was staggering. The lovers-to-enemies-to-lovers didn't really ring true because half the book they spent hating each other so it was unbelievable that they ever even dated in the first place. 

I don't think they should have gotten together in this book. If things had a longer time to simmer, I may have found it more palatable, but it just felt too forced.