One thing I'm bugged by (and only 30 pages in) is that there is no spacing between paragraphs that skip from one character doing one thing to another character doing another in the story.
The spacing never recovered, it all felt a bit rushed. That being said, I still got through this book quickly. I guessed the secret Mary's father was supposed to tell her way before it was revealed.
*I won this book in a group here on Goodreads*