The concept was super intriguing but I think the writing was just wonky. The sentences were so choppy in some parts it was super distracting. There was also just a bunch of unnecessary information that led to literally no where plot wise. Rebekah and Heaven's characters were slightly believable and understandable in their actions and motives, Hugh's character and actions were not. It just made no sense. 

Sex is the only thing that can make up for poor plot. This couldve been redeemed if the smut was actually spicy and not just a vague brief description or a passing sentence about how they were so horny. 

1 star for interesting concept