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Natural Twenty by Charlie Novak
2.0
lighthearted medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This was fine. The last 25% made up for the first 75%. 

I’m not a fan of first person narrative where the character is highly anxious, has low self esteem, and speaks negatively about themselves. To me, romance should be a fantasy, an escape. That motif is really hard to sit through.