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Brides of Rome by Debra May MacLeod
3.0
challenging dark emotional medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Weirdly, I first read about the Vestals Virgins, their place in Roman society and the punishment inflicted on them should they forget their vows in one of my favourite children's books! So when I saw this book and the promise that it would tell me such a story in a more mature fashion (while hopefully not giving me nightmares for a month!), I had to pick it up. And the first chapter set me up with exactly what I'd hoped for - something more detailed, but not drawn out or gratuitous. 

The story then moves on to follow the life of the Priestess Pomponia, one of the Vestals who it seems might be harbouring some impure thoughts. The book takes place over a 20 year period, from the day she graduates from novice to Priestess, to the last day of her 30 years' service, following her as she comes into contact with the highest echelons of Roman society and beyond. 

The author has done a great job at weaving fact and fiction together; many well known real characters play sizeable roles, and yet their appearance doesn't feel forced or fake. Despite most chapters starting with a substantial time jump (usually about a year) and perhaps feeling a little disconnected from each other, the story does flow well and isn't hard to follow. I'd also say that the author has clearly spent a great deal of time studying the geography of the period - without going into minute description, she still manages to successfully transport you into the heart of Ancient Rome and immerse you in your surroundings.

However, the story itself is a bit of a let down. You expect fireworks, but all you really get is a damp squib. The author builds up expectation on a few different plot lines from the get go, only to not follow through to a satisfying conclusion for the reader on any of them. On a couple of occasions I was turning a page expecting to have reached 'the good bit' or a particular pay off, and it just never happened. The frustrating thing is that the author has done a really good job at making the characters relatable and connecting you with them emotionally, so for there to be no real climax is beyond disappointing. I'd argue that even the blurb on this book is a bit misleading, which just adds to the frustration.

I did enjoy reading this, but I just needed more!

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