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Hekla's Children by James Brogden
3.0
dark funny mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

The story really picked up about the halfway point and was really strong in the second half, but then fell flat a bit for me in the final 20 pages. I think it would have been a stronger story if the author had focused more on the fantasy aspects and the interdeminsional travel over the monster coming into the real world.